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With childhood obesity at an all time high

Topic: With childhood obesity at an all time high our generation may be the first to outlive our offspring.

Preferred language style: English (U.S.)

Thesis Statement: With childhood obesity at an all time high, our generation may be the first to outlive our offspring.
A. Obesity
1. What is Childhood obesity?
2. Causes of childhood obesity.
3. Why is childhood obesity considered to be at an all time high?
B. Health Risks
1. Some illnesses caused by obesity
2. How obese children are affected by health risks
3. How do illnesses affect children differently than adults
C. Life Span
1. The average lifespan of our generation
2. Research showing our offspring having a shortened lifespan due to illnesses from obesity

Conclusion: If our children continue to raise the obesity rate their illnesses will become more of a problem and death may be the outcome at earlier ages.

Graded On
introduction-body-conclusion structure
main thesis idea clearly stated in introduction
supporting ideas organized into groups
enough details/examples/specifics so the reader can understand your main and supporting ideas
clear, grammatically-correct language
analysis includes reasons and evidence verifying why you have taken a certain side of an issue
synthesis of information from sources to back up and verify your own reasons why; correct listing of those sources in a Works Cited page (MLA format)
information from sources summarized appropriately; summaries include author’s main idea, your language, attribution, and documentation

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