Video games

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it is a argumentative essay . This is my final essay and 60% counts on my total at this essay.
I already wrote my refutation but i need you to fix the intro duct argument and counterargument.
I ordered my essay from you but i already missed my deadline so thats why i reordered it for revision.
I need more sources and backing up the studies and the researches done. Please check for proofreading. In the essay i wrote between the sentences (who said) or (back up) by this i mean i need evidence for example according to Patrick Markey and etc. When you mention recent studies have shown… you have to mention which studies or who found these studies,
In text citation
and Harvard referencing style
All sources must be academic

Video games

Paper details:

.
it is a argumentative essay . This is my final essay and 60% counts on my total at this essay.
I already wrote my refutation but i need you to fix the intro duct argument and counterargument.
I ordered my essay from you but i already missed my deadline so thats why i reordered it for revision.
I need more sources and backing up the studies and the researches done. Please check for proofreading. In the essay i wrote between the sentences (who said) or (back up) by this i mean i need evidence for example according to Patrick Markey and etc. When you mention recent studies have shown… you have to mention which studies or who found these studies,
In text citation
and Harvard referencing style
All sources must be academic