synthesis essay

This is a synthesis essay, has to be very objective, so word such as you can not be appeal.
Please check my grammar, including articles, definite, indefinite, and verb missing. also sentence structure.
The essay should be logic and each sentence should have to show reason such as (cause – effect)
Help me with a better thesis and primes. Also conclusion.

Using evidence drawn from “Crime and Punishment”, “Inferno”, and “Prometheus Bound” write a synthesis essay that explores the role of consequences in our life and how they effect whether we choose to do what we think is right.
http://www.slideshare.net/gbrown8192/dantes-inferno-2609417http://www.tabula-rasa.info/Horror/Inferno.html