I am looking to make this essay more sentimental and descriptive. I would like it to show more of my experience rather than tell. There is a 650 word limit and a 3800 character limit (including spaces).

You can edit any aspect of the essay as long as you keep my basic meaning. I want it to show how I am responsible, a leader, caring, loyal, and other great personal qualities through examples and experiences. I am willing to work with you and you can ask me questions about my experience

I would like to have it edited as soon as possible. I need it under $25