The Syllabus requires that all assignments must have quotations and references from the course textbooks; I do not see any of these in your Essay. Also you have one citation that does not have a reference at the end of the Essay. Assignments that do not meet these requirements cannot receive good grades. Also, you have several grammar/spelling errors that could be eliminated with careful proofreading and correcting; and in the proofreading, to read carefully, thinking through what you want to communicate and consider each word to make sure it is fully and correctly spelled. This is one of those BLT Principles (Bottom Line Truth Principles) [1] of excellent writing habits for clear communicating of the important biblical truths. If you want to make all of the corrections and resubmit, I will gladly, joyfully, and gratefully raise your grade! Please be sure to fulfill the spelling, grammar, and reference requirements in all future assignments. 🙂