Philosophy is a waste of time

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Philosophy is a waste of time

Rate on a scale from 1 which is unsatisfactory to 5 excellent:
1- the  grammar style
2- thesis and development
3- organization
4- exposition

Give some comments on the following: Grammar,  thesis, organization, and exposition
I have attached the essay as pictures so you will be able to modify. but you can edit on the same document if you would like to or whatever is best for you do it.