Personal Essay:· Discuss your reasons for pursuing this degree.
· Discuss your academic strengths and weaknesses as they pertain to your intended program.
· Describe how you plan to balance the time commitment required for the program (about 10 hours per week per course and 15-20 hours for dissertation) with your personal and professional responsibilities.

I have attached my CV an old personal essay and I want you to edit it and rewrite to make it better and has better quality. The personal essay for an admission for PhD in an information system.