My instructor read my draft and made some suggestions. I put in yellow the sentences and paragraphs that she wants me to fix/add. I put in (bold) her comments and what she wants me to improve in. This paper suppose to be 15 pages long. So you can fix what is already done and add more information. She also wants me to go deeper and come up with something that the average person does not already know. She gave me some ideas to expand my curiosity so here I attached the list and you can add things from there that are not included yet.

(1) Compare the D.A.S.H. diet with the Mediterranean diet and heart disease.
(2) Compare one of the above diets and heart disease with one of the class of drugs used to treat heart disease.
(3) Pick a class of drugs used to treat heart disease and see if they are any better than dietary changes
(4) What is/are the link/s between diet and exercise and heart disease?
(5) Can diet alone prevent heart disease?
(6) Can exercise alone prevent heart disease?
(7) What is the relationship between low birth weight babies and heart disease? Does lifestyle really matter or are we already destined for heart disease if we were a low-birth weight baby?
(8) Take a look at supplements, which are totally unregulated by the FDA, and determine if they are a hit or hype in regard to preventing or treating heart disease.
(8) Find some unanswered question or something that you actually have to read about in the primary literature and delve into.