neural mechanisms of the dance.

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Dear writer this parer is very important to me please follow the direction I snd you the paper just i want you to make up this parer i will send you the steps that how you must to make up this paper, also there are 5 articles one of it is the mane article, and 4 of them plus material from my text book suppose to support my essay the first article which is the main I will send you first. and just you make up my paperBee Paper Notes
1. Consider changing the name of your title, as it does not reflect what is actually being discussed in your paper. You do not talk about the origin of the honeybee dance, but instead, the neural mechanisms of the dance.
2. Consider defining what “modulation” is. You mention it in paragraph 2, but do not define what this actually is.
3. Consider using your textbook as a source to summarize the honeybee dance in the first two paragraphs and then wait to use the actual article until you introduce it in the third paragraph. At the moment, you use the article as a source for the first two paragraphs and then formally introduce it in the third paragraph.
4. I don’t quite see where you included “concepts learned in this course (e.g. social behavior, habitat selection, reproductive behavior, mate preference, hormones & behavior etc.).” Perhaps go back to your textbook and include something you learned from the textbook/course in your intro. Similar to #3, I think you could use your textbook more for the first 2 paragraphs before you discuss the article in paragraph 3.
5. In your results section, I don’t see where you “Describe the suggested applications of these findings by the authors. What are the real life implications of the findings suggested by the authors?” You discuss the scientific results, but do not really tell the reader what these results infer.
6. In your results section, you paraphrase from Tanner and Visscher 2006, but you seem to just regurgitate the same information you spoke about earlier. Consider using information from this article to add something new to the conversation.
this paper have to have 5 page not more than 5 page without the cover page and reference.
neural mechanisms of the dance.

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Dear writer this parer is very important to me please follow the direction I snd you the paper just i want you to make up this parer i will send you the steps that how you must to make up this paper, also there are 5 articles one of it is the mane article, and 4 of them plus material from my text book suppose to support my essay the first article which is the main I will send you first. and just you make up my paperBee Paper Notes
1. Consider changing the name of your title, as it does not reflect what is actually being discussed in your paper. You do not talk about the origin of the honeybee dance, but instead, the neural mechanisms of the dance.
2. Consider defining what “modulation” is. You mention it in paragraph 2, but do not define what this actually is.
3. Consider using your textbook as a source to summarize the honeybee dance in the first two paragraphs and then wait to use the actual article until you introduce it in the third paragraph. At the moment, you use the article as a source for the first two paragraphs and then formally introduce it in the third paragraph.
4. I don’t quite see where you included “concepts learned in this course (e.g. social behavior, habitat selection, reproductive behavior, mate preference, hormones & behavior etc.).” Perhaps go back to your textbook and include something you learned from the textbook/course in your intro. Similar to #3, I think you could use your textbook more for the first 2 paragraphs before you discuss the article in paragraph 3.
5. In your results section, I don’t see where you “Describe the suggested applications of these findings by the authors. What are the real life implications of the findings suggested by the authors?” You discuss the scientific results, but do not really tell the reader what these results infer.
6. In your results section, you paraphrase from Tanner and Visscher 2006, but you seem to just regurgitate the same information you spoke about earlier. Consider using information from this article to add something new to the conversation.
this paper have to have 5 page not more than 5 page without the cover page and reference.

neural mechanisms of the dance.

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Dear writer this parer is very important to me please follow the direction I snd you the paper just i want you to make up this parer i will send you the steps that how you must to make up this paper, also there are 5 articles one of it is the mane article, and 4 of them plus material from my text book suppose to support my essay the first article which is the main I will send you first. and just you make up my paperBee Paper Notes
1. Consider changing the name of your title, as it does not reflect what is actually being discussed in your paper. You do not talk about the origin of the honeybee dance, but instead, the neural mechanisms of the dance.
2. Consider defining what “modulation” is. You mention it in paragraph 2, but do not define what this actually is.
3. Consider using your textbook as a source to summarize the honeybee dance in the first two paragraphs and then wait to use the actual article until you introduce it in the third paragraph. At the moment, you use the article as a source for the first two paragraphs and then formally introduce it in the third paragraph.
4. I don’t quite see where you included “concepts learned in this course (e.g. social behavior, habitat selection, reproductive behavior, mate preference, hormones & behavior etc.).” Perhaps go back to your textbook and include something you learned from the textbook/course in your intro. Similar to #3, I think you could use your textbook more for the first 2 paragraphs before you discuss the article in paragraph 3.
5. In your results section, I don’t see where you “Describe the suggested applications of these findings by the authors. What are the real life implications of the findings suggested by the authors?” You discuss the scientific results, but do not really tell the reader what these results infer.
6. In your results section, you paraphrase from Tanner and Visscher 2006, but you seem to just regurgitate the same information you spoke about earlier. Consider using information from this article to add something new to the conversation.
this paper have to have 5 page not more than 5 page without the cover page and reference.
neural mechanisms of the dance.

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Dear writer this parer is very important to me please follow the direction I snd you the paper just i want you to make up this parer i will send you the steps that how you must to make up this paper, also there are 5 articles one of it is the mane article, and 4 of them plus material from my text book suppose to support my essay the first article which is the main I will send you first. and just you make up my paperBee Paper Notes
1. Consider changing the name of your title, as it does not reflect what is actually being discussed in your paper. You do not talk about the origin of the honeybee dance, but instead, the neural mechanisms of the dance.
2. Consider defining what “modulation” is. You mention it in paragraph 2, but do not define what this actually is.
3. Consider using your textbook as a source to summarize the honeybee dance in the first two paragraphs and then wait to use the actual article until you introduce it in the third paragraph. At the moment, you use the article as a source for the first two paragraphs and then formally introduce it in the third paragraph.
4. I don’t quite see where you included “concepts learned in this course (e.g. social behavior, habitat selection, reproductive behavior, mate preference, hormones & behavior etc.).” Perhaps go back to your textbook and include something you learned from the textbook/course in your intro. Similar to #3, I think you could use your textbook more for the first 2 paragraphs before you discuss the article in paragraph 3.
5. In your results section, I don’t see where you “Describe the suggested applications of these findings by the authors. What are the real life implications of the findings suggested by the authors?” You discuss the scientific results, but do not really tell the reader what these results infer.
6. In your results section, you paraphrase from Tanner and Visscher 2006, but you seem to just regurgitate the same information you spoke about earlier. Consider using information from this article to add something new to the conversation.
this paper have to have 5 page not more than 5 page without the cover page and reference.