THESE ARE JUST A FEW ITEMS SHE TOOK OFF ON MY LAST PAPER…

Overall, you really need to work on many things for future reports because the remainder of them will be written in this same manner.

In the intro: provide much more background and include references for anything you don’t know. Think about things such as why are you writing this report and why is it important (other than of course that you have to do it!).

The hypothesis should be written in an “if/then” statement and you did not include one for this experiment, which will directly affect your conclusions section and questions you have to answer regarding your hypothesis.

Materials and methods: In this section, you really need to expand more. This should be so detailed that if I were to copy this experiment using your lab report, then I could do it exactly like you did and get the exact same results. Sometimes it helps to write this section as you go along with the steps of the lab so you include every single thing you did and not leave out anything.

Your results were your best section, but don’t forget to add graphs or charts as needed to show your data.

The conclusions could use some work. You need to expand them greatly and answer all the questions from the experiment that are asked and also the ones you have in the rubric as well.

Criteria
Title
Introduction (1)
Introduction (2)
Methods and Materials (1)
Methods and Materials (2)
Results and Discussion (1)
Results and Discussion (2)
Results and Discussion (3)
Conclusion (1)
Conclusion (2)
Conclusion (3)
Conclusion (4)
References

Please format references in APA format…