These were the notes left from the essay you wrote last week.

You should probably develop a more comprehensive thesis comparing how gender is portrayed in the setting of Trifles to the 21st century. You have some solid supporting details regarding gender roles from within the play, however, you have no integrated quotes from the play, which you must make use of. Integrated quotes from the actual play are a requirement in the assignment description. You should also include some comparison of the gender roles in the play to the modern society — again, as the instructions ask you to do. Please review APA format. For example, references should be on a separate page. There is also no solid concluding paragraph.