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Criterion 1: Grammar, mechanics, puncutation and word choice are acceptably effective, polished, and generally suitable for an audience.
Criterion 2: The essay successfully incorporates supporting detail, clear discussion, thoughtful ideas and strong language to reach the reader.
Criterion 3: The essay uses a structure that is intentional, appropriate to its purpose, and uses an effective intro and conclusion.
Criterion 4: The conclusion recalls important points and restates thesis and establishes greater significance of the discussion and presents solutions when possible. Also, the essay presents a memorable and powerful ending.