Need help with Editing my Dissertation Proposal about INTERNET OF THINGS (IoT) Security. it’s for 15 pages and need to be perfect and fixed… I have the following comments need to be fixed, below the feedback i got :
1-Can you just check the English at least in the abstract and problem statement? There are several phrases I simply don’t understand the meaning…
2- Do you have in your mind at which level you want to work in IoT security?
This is important to define the roadmap and goals you wish to achieve on your investigation.
Or, by other words, what will be your contribution to the field?
How do you plan to demonstrate the validation of your proposals?