1st paragraph opinion thesis introduction
1) clear thesis
2) Date, time frame
3) Style of history(name, style, use other authors)
4) Why is it important to historian
Body paragraphs
1) Need a fact!
2) How does it go with the thesis
3)Critical thinking

Conclusion and more than just restating thesis speak opinion
2 paragraphs a page 2 facts per page at least and citation for each page use foot notes. I have 6 articles you must find one more article from jstor! 1900 or later, must be a academic article. Giving links to below if you have to type in password its dburton for username and 2158820879 for password

http://books.google.com/books?hl=en&lr=&id=kBagAAAAMAAJ&oi=fnd&pg=PA118&dq=%22national+geographic%22+roosevelt+neanderthals&ots=ueupFm4tMH&sig=dGuLwfl6km3UYfjXGRZKa9ghFo8#v=onepage&q=%22national%20geographic%22%20roosevelt%20neanderthals&f=false

http://www.jstor.org.library.genesee.edu/stable/20454724

http://www.jstor.org.library.genesee.edu/stable/2562638

http://www.jstor.org.library.genesee.edu/stable/162820

http://www.jstor.org.library.genesee.edu/stable/163101

http://www.jstor.org.library.genesee.edu/stable/205276

http://www.jstor.org.library.genesee.edu/stable/2515829

http://www.jstor.org.library.genesee.edu/stable/1154147

*international Drug trade through out history (part of thesis) Example explore transportation, impacts(good or bad) countries, people, economics, politics, culture