Discuss the changing role of the state in development with reference to humanitarian intervention.

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Merge the two documents into one essay, consisting of 5000 words, with all the bibliography. The work needs modifications, but those should be based on what has already been prepared. To clarify: the comments to the first draft of the essay (upwere: “There is some very intresting and apt history here, told in great detail, based on 41 excellent sources, which you could have used to construct a good essay on the role of the state in development, with reference to all this material. But you have not mentioned development once, which is a key element of this essay.If you had been answerting a different essay question of the changing role of the state in humanitarian intervention, this would have been a good essay, but as this was not the question, you have not answered the question that was asked and will need to rewrite the essay. You need to work on language and accuracy in terms of spelling and transcription of quoted material. An interesting piece in itself, but not sufficient to pass until you bring an element of development into it. Potential for good marks.” I would like you to make some changes in that spirit, to cut some pieces and add some bits here and there, so the work refers to development more. The first uploaded material is the first draft to which the comments were as above. The second is another attempt on that topic done using 9 sources. I would like to receive one essay, from the two combined, that would best answer the question.

Discuss the changing role of the state in development with reference to humanitarian intervention.

Paper details:
Merge the two documents into one essay, consisting of 5000 words, with all the bibliography. The work needs modifications, but those should be based on what has already been prepared. To clarify: the comments to the first draft of the essay (upwere: “There is some very intresting and apt history here, told in great detail, based on 41 excellent sources, which you could have used to construct a good essay on the role of the state in development, with reference to all this material. But you have not mentioned development once, which is a key element of this essay.If you had been answerting a different essay question of the changing role of the state in humanitarian intervention, this would have been a good essay, but as this was not the question, you have not answered the question that was asked and will need to rewrite the essay. You need to work on language and accuracy in terms of spelling and transcription of quoted material. An interesting piece in itself, but not sufficient to pass until you bring an element of development into it. Potential for good marks.” I would like you to make some changes in that spirit, to cut some pieces and add some bits here and there, so the work refers to development more. The first uploaded material is the first draft to which the comments were as above. The second is another attempt on that topic done using 9 sources. I would like to receive one essay, from the two combined, that would best answer the question.

Discuss the changing role of the state in development with reference to humanitarian intervention.

Paper details:
Merge the two documents into one essay, consisting of 5000 words, with all the bibliography. The work needs modifications, but those should be based on what has already been prepared. To clarify: the comments to the first draft of the essay (upwere: “There is some very intresting and apt history here, told in great detail, based on 41 excellent sources, which you could have used to construct a good essay on the role of the state in development, with reference to all this material. But you have not mentioned development once, which is a key element of this essay.If you had been answerting a different essay question of the changing role of the state in humanitarian intervention, this would have been a good essay, but as this was not the question, you have not answered the question that was asked and will need to rewrite the essay. You need to work on language and accuracy in terms of spelling and transcription of quoted material. An interesting piece in itself, but not sufficient to pass until you bring an element of development into it. Potential for good marks.” I would like you to make some changes in that spirit, to cut some pieces and add some bits here and there, so the work refers to development more. The first uploaded material is the first draft to which the comments were as above. The second is another attempt on that topic done using 9 sources. I would like to receive one essay, from the two combined, that would best answer the question.