The paper needs to be 1800 – 2000 words. Right now I have about 1200. The paper is about the history of Berlin from 1700-1848. Please edit/fix any aspect of the paper, especially the thesis as the professor said he liked the idea but needed it clarified. I would like to stick with what I have in terms of ideas for the most part, just adding onto them and fixing the paragraphs to better support the thesis. I also need help tying them in together because the professor said that it seems like they are disjoint events. Note: I selected two pages because that is what I need added onto it.