Atomic absorption / emission spectroscopy (AA).

For this report i have my draft but i got a bad grade and i need to be fixed. I have attached images for my draft with the professors comments on it so that you can use them to fix the report. and please do not use the same way that i wrote the procedure he said its too much he did not want every detail like (click this and click that).
I also have attached lab manual that has procedure analysis questions that you need to answer for both part and discussion.
I attached writing guidelines plz follow them strictly.
I have attached the results which they are in a txt file.
Also lab notes that i took during the lab it self it will help you understand what i did.

Plz answer all analysis and discussion questions for both parts. and do the curves needed.

Do not count the reference as a page if you will them do not add one.