PART 1:
Making corrections on the reserach proposal attached as per the supervisors commends.
The most imprtant changes are all highlighted. To note is the slight change in case study from specific to ready pay to general MTN Mobile Financial Services.
Several areas in the proposal highlighted shows where the corrections need to be made including in the reserach objectives/Questions.
PART 2:
The second part of this assignment is to write the Chapter 1 on the reserach report which should be done with mindset that the overal research proposal shall be 12,000 words and shall be done chapter by chapter after supervisors’ approval of each chapter.
USEFUL INFORMATION;
THERE IS A LOT OF PUBLICATION ON MOBILE MONEY SERVICES IN UGANDA ON THE INTERNET, PLEASE MAKE USE OF THE SAME.
ALSO LOOK AT THE APECT OF MOBILE MONEY PENETRATION AS PER THE SUPERVISORS COMMENTS.
KEEP THE DISCUSSION ON MOBILE MONEY AND MOBILE BANKING IS JUST ONE OF THE SERVICES, KINDLY KEEP THAT IN MIND.
NB 1: The reserach entity MTN-Uganda and its Mobile Money products are highlighted in in this link below.
https://www.mtn.co.ug/Mobile%20Money/Pages/default.aspx
NB 2: The region under consideration is highlighted in the map on the link below;
http://nilecareinc.org/?page_id=60
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/West_Nile_sub-region
Make a quotation for the 2 assignments.
Please let me know if you have any clarifications.