-Check the feedback on the essay I took 47 out of 50 I need full mark this time.
-You have to use the same essay I attached the draft (5paragraph essay) and continue to expand on it.
-I need 11 paragraphs essay (2200 words).
-Use the Analytical-Argumentative outline I attached and follow it EXACTLY.
-You can see the video for further details.
-Use only the 5 references I upload. No more.
-The fourth source (ted-talk) should be against my point of view, the rest is for. I already attached my annotation for all references it may help you to understand what references talking about.
-Listen to the audio feedback and work on expanding the conclusion (solutions) and a bit more on the introduction.
-GRAMMER.