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this is the final paper, he is very detail oriented. Here is the comment he gave for my last paper

Good and focused essay. Avoid using obvious passive voice constructions which make your essay less authoritative. For example, you use the constructions “was known” and “is said”. In historical arguments, we use evidence to avoid this type of writing. 53/60.
the main book that we used this semester was the last Mughal by william dalrymple and also Modern south Asia the third edition by sugata Bose and Ayesha Jalal. please used them as my references also please use articles not books for other references. thank you

Order Description
this is the final paper, he is very detail oriented. Here is the comment he gave for my last paper

Good and focused essay. Avoid using obvious passive voice constructions which make your essay less authoritative. For example, you use the constructions “was known” and “is said”. In historical arguments, we use evidence to avoid this type of writing. 53/60.
the main book that we used this semester was the last Mughal by william dalrymple and also Modern south Asia the third edition by sugata Bose and Ayesha Jalal. please used them as my references also please use articles not books for other references. thank you