This is the paper that you wrote. My instructor left some comments on it. It may need to rewrite or edit. Here is the instructors comment: You mentioned that you like that the author used statistics, was clear, but omitted the possibility that some Americans dont like the rise in international students. This is a good idea for a response. I would like to see more support and substance in your response though. Pick one main topic or item to respond to and then respond to it in more depth. Also, your summary is very detailed. It certainly does not leave anything out, but I think it should be shortened and made more concise, perhaps without including so many details that are likely unnecessary. Let me know if this doesnt make sense or if there is any questions you have: Essays