Exercise 3
The following short paragraphs about new exercise products need to be revised to fit into a printed catalog. The catalog designer wants paragraphs of no more then 40 words, and she thinks the writing here has some style issues as well. Revise these paragraphs to retain the necessary information and meet the 40 word requirement.
The Hercules Skater will strengthen legs, especially thigh muscles. In will also strengthen muscles in the stomach and build power in the calves. The State with two foot pads glides along a rocking platform shaped in a slight arc. The user can set the foot pads for six different tension settings. When the user steps on the foot pads, he or she can glide back and forth, maintaining balance and exercising the thigh and leg muscles. The Hercules Skater comes with a balance pole for beginners. The Hercules Skater has been determined by experts to develop the multidirectional movement required by sports, such as tennis, football, and basketball.