Journalism – Ledes

Paper instructions:
All of the material in this quiz is available in the “Watch your words†conference topics. For each sentence please do two things:

1. Please describe all of the problems you see with each of the following five ledes.
2. Edit each lede so it is correct. You may add or delete words, but do not rewrite the whole lede. Just change what’s necessary. You may find more than one error in some of the sentences.