Evaluation essay

my parents are both teachers so i started learning english in the age of 5. i went to american camp several times in elementary school which made me fell in love with english. i was raised in taiwan and i went to american school in 7th grade till 9th grade.. and thts the time i officially learning english. i went to canada after that. i struggled for a couple months in my high school years. but people are friendly and i met a filipino friend which was the main part made my english better. i came to seattle in college year , the place with full of white people which gives me more chance to speak english. (this is the timeline. the writer can use your own ideas and creativity to expand the essay!)