W5D1
Problem Statement Draft 2 (Due Day 3)

The revised draft of your general problem should be one paragraph in length.

Begin with several sentences, which introduce the general problem.
Explicitly state and cite the general problem, followed by several sentences in which you detail and cite the adversity associated with the general problem.
Explain the revisions you made and how you addressed the comments provided to you by your instructor.
Between Day 3 and Day 5 provide a critique to each classmate focusing heavily on opportunities for improvement. All recommendations should conform to the conventions detailed in the Dissertation Field Guide. For each recommendation, identify the page number where your student can find additional details in support of your recommendation.