Need an editing/rewriting of the attached draft International organized crime focused on money laundering (success/failures) its link to terrorist organizations and or drug organizations (region, countries). Need to eventually (future and final paper) explain the issue (not describe the issue).

Instructions (Attached is further explanation for this sections). Also a couple of issues that need o be corrected on the first draft (attached):

– Need to be much more specific with your source engagement, don’t just offer general summaries of information throughout paragraph followed by a Justice general citation at the end.
– You need to be much more critical and focused with regards to using sources. Incorporate specific and direct quotes into the main body of paragraphs/discussion.

– See attached draft with notes for further instructions.